1. 原来的开头真烂，哦不，真好笑，好笑到我要附一张图（见图
2. Poetry needs to sound nice
3. 'Terrible City' is truly terrible
4. Vivien Eliot is a very, very good reader and she has wisdom
5. Eliot's couplets sound so lazy. 虽然我不喜欢 Pope, 但不得不承认 Pope 不好学。Also: It's funny how I enjoy Eliot and Pope in very similar ways. Well. At least when I still enjoyed Pope.
6. Pound is discerning. Pound is often right about poetry. I need to read Pound.
7. Writing is a labour. 看他的 work process 很有意思因为他一开始也不知道要写什么，风格也不稳定，at the end of the day eventually it's 多写多改。idk but I have read elsewhere about some poets not working in this way, which surprised me, but now this is reassuring because that's also how I work with my writing...